Ceriwis - Please C&C

I almost don't want to put these up, I liked the results of the shots in shadow but the shots where I used the flash did not come out to well. But if I don't get the C&C I will never know what I did wrong.
 
Camera: Canon Rebel XSi
 
1. F/25 Focal 25mm Exposure 1/40 ISO 100
I was trying to get as at least 3 towers and some clouds into the steel ring. I want to crop this later and see what I can do with it.
 
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2. F/25 Focal 25mm Exposure 1/5 ISO 100 with flash.
Almost got what I was looking for, blur on the top of ring and cut off the top.
 
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3. F/22 Focal 25mm Exposure 1/40 ISO 100
If only I could have gotten that other tower in, I would have been much happier.
 
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